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.Lucy.
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Soluble

Post by .Lucy. » November 24th, 2010, 10:51 pm

Inertia pulls me towards a bubble gum center.
I refuse to take
a sugary bite.

Run from the coated shell
of ozone
and molecular oxidizing.

The atoms wither,
a flaky crust of radioactive tartness.

Cathartic release of liquid O.


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Re: Soluble

Post by dadio » December 12th, 2010, 9:57 am

Yes, good write, love it.
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