BIRDIE SLEEPS.
BIRDIE SLEEPS.
Birdie sleeps, Clare said.
Bird’s dead, Granddad said,
Taking the still warm
Bird from the child’s small
Hands where it had been
Cupped like some precious
Jewel. Dead? Clare asked
Confused, watching her
Granddad’s huge hands take
The bird from her view.
Is that what all the
Small birdies do? Yeah
All go that way, Clare,
All go to the big
Maker in the sky.
Clare bit her tiny
Fingernail asking,
Why? Well kid, all things
Have to go sometimes:
Birds, cats, dogs, horses,
Me, you, Grandma, and
The old guy who sits
Outside the drugstore
Begging for dough; all
Got to go to the
Big maker in the
Big blue sky when their
Number’s up. Clare sat
Wondering where the
Birdie had gone. Had
Granddad put it in
His pocket or where?
She continued to
Wonder with her blue
Eyed stare. Is the small
Birdie in your big
Coat pocket or is
It someplace elsewhere?
She softly pleaded.
It’s tucked away in
My old coat pocket
Along with my pipe
Tobacco and my
White peppermint creams.
I will bury it
Later, Granddad said,
With my all broken
Promises and your
Grandma’s dreams. Clare looked
At her empty hands,
The warmth of the bird
Still there, it had left
Two small brown feathers
There for her to share.
Bird’s dead, Granddad said,
Taking the still warm
Bird from the child’s small
Hands where it had been
Cupped like some precious
Jewel. Dead? Clare asked
Confused, watching her
Granddad’s huge hands take
The bird from her view.
Is that what all the
Small birdies do? Yeah
All go that way, Clare,
All go to the big
Maker in the sky.
Clare bit her tiny
Fingernail asking,
Why? Well kid, all things
Have to go sometimes:
Birds, cats, dogs, horses,
Me, you, Grandma, and
The old guy who sits
Outside the drugstore
Begging for dough; all
Got to go to the
Big maker in the
Big blue sky when their
Number’s up. Clare sat
Wondering where the
Birdie had gone. Had
Granddad put it in
His pocket or where?
She continued to
Wonder with her blue
Eyed stare. Is the small
Birdie in your big
Coat pocket or is
It someplace elsewhere?
She softly pleaded.
It’s tucked away in
My old coat pocket
Along with my pipe
Tobacco and my
White peppermint creams.
I will bury it
Later, Granddad said,
With my all broken
Promises and your
Grandma’s dreams. Clare looked
At her empty hands,
The warmth of the bird
Still there, it had left
Two small brown feathers
There for her to share.
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Aaahh. I know you. Nice writing and I like your profile picture. Nice to meet the face behind the words.
Re: BIRDIE SLEEPS.
Thank you. What a face, eh? Glad you like the poem. 

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Actually, it is a good face. Much better than the one I originally pictured. If you recall, I was the one who said I saw you as a grizzled old man with a hooked nose and a back hunched from sitting at a writing table in a barren room and writing by the light of either an oil lamp or a candle. I to have an imagination. Not as good as yours, but it is alive and well.
Re: BIRDIE SLEEPS.
Lol, I liked your description. Imaginative. 

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Re: BIRDIE SLEEPS.
Yeah, but you just look like a nice man. Not some grizzled hunch back cackling evilly as he writes his gut wrenching little gems.
Re: BIRDIE SLEEPS.
i cannot argue with that. 

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Re: BIRDIE SLEEPS.
No you can't, because I will always have a come back.
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Re: BIRDIE SLEEPS.
This one touched a response chord. I have been reading your poetry posts and enjoying -- including Mr. Fudgee.
I like cats more than dogs 'cause dogs insist on Frenchkissing. Pfui.
Sue♥
I like cats more than dogs 'cause dogs insist on Frenchkissing. Pfui.
Sue♥
Re: BIRDIE SLEEPS.
I don't know if the painting could be classified a great art, but it did inspire the poem. 

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