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"????"

Post by rshreve » January 29th, 2011, 3:02 pm

Earth explosion
orgasmic eruption
pleasure or pain
who is, to decide
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Re: "????"

Post by joel » January 29th, 2011, 3:07 pm

Ew... if it hurts, ya gotta see a doctor, bro.

But really...this is different. I've enjoyed your postings and enjoyed their linear, narrative poetostorytelling...but here is something rich and different -- not better, not worse -- but graceful and urgent and explosive. I'm enjoying it all.

Thanks, joel
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw
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Re: "????"

Post by rshreve » January 29th, 2011, 3:09 pm

lol
thank you for reading
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