horrors of days passed

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horrors of days passed

Post by no1special » February 7th, 2011, 5:29 pm

Horrors of days passed
venomous tones cast wrecklessly
sharpened sermon skillfully arranged
heartache packaged neatly
swiftly exchanged
the two are to blame
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Re: horrors of days passed

Post by dadio » February 8th, 2011, 5:05 am

Deep poem;enjoyed. 8)
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Re: horrors of days passed

Post by saw » February 8th, 2011, 9:54 am

turbulent movement brings this to life........nice economy of words........
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Re: horrors of days passed

Post by creativesoul » February 11th, 2011, 2:30 pm

megwich
50% of everything, and nothing
got half of what i deserve
half mine and half yers
irie heyo aho
they say God is everything or nothing- i guess they were right
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