says the little brat

Post by **joel** » February 17th, 2011, 6:42 pm

The twilit snow’s turned blue at least, the same
delinquent periwinkle hint that halts
the winter’s perfect day-sky-blue—
and all the roadside refuse that so shamefully
disrupts the blank-slate snowbanks vaults
away on silhouetted trees whose hue
is just as two-dimensional and flat
and focused like the morning fore the dawn—
and this is how my paradise is drawn:
with purple floors and ceiling-rafters that
are marked and messed with scars some Cheshire cat
decided to impart in place of confidential,
hidden grins— “Hell’s bells: I’m on
to something genius!” says the little brat.

Post by **ToXic aPplE** » February 17th, 2011, 7:14 pm

Beautiful

Post by **stilltrucking** » February 19th, 2011, 7:31 pm

vivid

Post by **Sue Littleton** » February 21st, 2011, 8:56 pm

JOELLLLL, SEND ME YOUR SNAIL MAIL ADDRESS AND YOUR E-MAIL. MY YAHOO WAS DEVOURED. mujermaiz@yahoo.com still works.

Bratty but beautiful poem, hugs, Sue♥♥♥

Post by **rite** » February 21st, 2011, 10:03 pm

Nicely done my poetic friend.

Post by **rite** » February 21st, 2011, 10:24 pm

Nicely done my poetic friend.

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