I gotta piss.

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joel
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I gotta piss.

Post by joel » March 28th, 2011, 5:16 pm

Forgive me if I break with etiquette,
but shit, I gotta leak— I gotta go—
and, yes, I know it’s inappropriate
to talk about our bathroom habits, though
I haven’t got another choice— I need
to get away from you and outta your
relentless conversation. When I’ve peed,
perhaps I might return— might take some more—
I maybe might be just polite enough
to look you in the eye and care about
the rambling details of the stupid stuff
that you soliloquize about. I doubt
it, though. My spirit needs an emptiness
from you. My bladder’s full. I gotta piss.
"Every genuinely religious person is a heretic, and therefore a revolutionary" -- GBShaw

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Arcadia
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Re: I gotta piss.

Post by Arcadia » March 28th, 2011, 9:28 pm

yeah, if you need to piss you have to piss (and there is always a place for that! :lol: :) )

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Re: I gotta piss.

Post by dadio » March 29th, 2011, 8:16 am

some people bring that on. fine poem too.

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Re: I gotta piss.

Post by ButterflyKiss » March 29th, 2011, 2:47 pm

You f'n kill me...I would so write something like this! I love it! Thanks for being brave enough to share!
`*.`~ButterflyKiss~`.*`

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