fallen dynastic metaphors or yabba dabba doo

[the mingo]

fallen dynastic metaphors abound
the merry-go-round has scarfed fantastic
o let sing Holy Joe & the Rollers
but don't bother me now
i've a frog woman glued
to my face & her source code tastes like
the edge of the ocean
yabba dabba doo

[saw]

Wow the second poem in the last few days with "scarf" in it...(check out Dino's poem, "random musings")......funny stuff hear, reminds me of a nutty string of jokes that were going around when I was a kid that taught me that humor can at times be off the charts.....beyond the obvious.....good stuff

[the mingo]

i hear that - poetry can take an awful turn to the deadening for lack of the tiniest particle of wit. it don't have to be funny, but it does have to be fun.