"the 2004 election" (revisited)

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mnaz
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"the 2004 election" (revisited)

Post by mnaz » May 18th, 2011, 2:54 pm

we, the people
in order to piss on a flat rock
hereby inject the koolaid

and though i don't speak sneer
there's a war on! that much is clear
so he refills the syringe with honor
got his finger on a button
god on a cell phone
stay the coarse
ride the hoarse

he got a buzz on, a strange hair
went down to the apocalypse for a beer
the measure of man is how he plays the end
sweet freedom to die for a parking lot
paves his grave with a speech

so dip me, strip me
pawn me, spawn me
where do i send the check?

red me, blue me
screw me, unscrew me
where do i send the check?

trash me, trick me
prod me, prick me
just stick a fork in it

--- m.a.n., 11/06 (revised)
Last edited by mnaz on May 18th, 2011, 8:08 pm, edited 7 times in total.

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Re: "the 2004 election" (revisited)

Post by saw » May 18th, 2011, 4:56 pm

groovy analysis professor mnazzzz......it's got rhythm for sure, but can you dance to it ?........keep 'em coming.....
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: "the 2004 election" (revisited)

Post by mnaz » May 18th, 2011, 8:06 pm

thanks steve. not sure why i relived this one. definitely not danceable !

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