"the 2004 election" (revisited)

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mnaz
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"the 2004 election" (revisited)

Post by mnaz » May 18th, 2011, 2:54 pm

we, the people
in order to piss on a flat rock
hereby inject the koolaid

and though i don't speak sneer
there's a war on! that much is clear
so he refills the syringe with honor
got his finger on a button
god on a cell phone
stay the coarse
ride the hoarse

he got a buzz on, a strange hair
went down to the apocalypse for a beer
the measure of man is how he plays the end
sweet freedom to die for a parking lot
paves his grave with a speech

so dip me, strip me
pawn me, spawn me
where do i send the check?

red me, blue me
screw me, unscrew me
where do i send the check?

trash me, trick me
prod me, prick me
just stick a fork in it

--- m.a.n., 11/06 (revised)
Last edited by mnaz on May 18th, 2011, 8:08 pm, edited 7 times in total.

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Re: "the 2004 election" (revisited)

Post by saw » May 18th, 2011, 4:56 pm

groovy analysis professor mnazzzz......it's got rhythm for sure, but can you dance to it ?........keep 'em coming.....
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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Re: "the 2004 election" (revisited)

Post by mnaz » May 18th, 2011, 8:06 pm

thanks steve. not sure why i relived this one. definitely not danceable !

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