words that cook up like hard rain

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words that cook up like hard rain

Post by revolutionrabbit » July 3rd, 2011, 5:15 am

cats are not like poets
and poets are not like cats
but cats and poets go together well
and the cat jumped over the spoon
take a drag of sun and moon
goes straight to the third eye
now....listen to this....cry chaos!
I got a needle full of ancient mariner
an opium pipe full of leaves of grass

can we ever be done with the killer of pain
with the words that cook up like hard rain
and we wait for the man with a dime bag
of poems on the corner of bliss and vine
and a good or bad poem, its all un-sane

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Re: words that cook up like hard rain

Post by saw » July 4th, 2011, 10:46 am

excellent wordplay .....has a feisty tempo & theme.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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