She knew

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creativesoul
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She knew

Post by creativesoul » September 13th, 2011, 4:49 am

The sun light was just creeping
Into the room where ceremony
Had gone late into the night

She taught me things
This lesson she blessed me with
Has unfolded in such a beautful way
I can help others
Watching listening
She, and many others taught me
That nothing happens over night
Change is what she showed me
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: She knew

Post by dadio » September 13th, 2011, 10:03 am

Good poem & theme.

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Re: She knew

Post by saw » September 14th, 2011, 8:01 pm

what a great epiphany when we see there are other paths........dig it
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: She knew

Post by creativesoul » September 15th, 2011, 8:09 pm

Those strands Of cobweb Like material
Floated around like a net tragically captive
Are the little dreams that sought
Embezelment and marriage
Grants and property
Got real lost
Then the spider
Sat down
Inside her
And

She knew soOner or later
Would catch the fly
I knew an old lady... See
Hear
Deer
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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