The Battlefield

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Atehequa
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The Battlefield

Post by Atehequa » September 15th, 2011, 6:22 pm

Relentless in the methods you use
A siege lasting longer than that of Troy
Any day of peace is only a ruse
Precursor of what you will next employ
I know by now you will never yield
As your only love is the battlefield

I have heard your accursed war horns sound
Ever baiting me to join in battle
I have watched you fuck on bloody ground
In between your taunts and saber rattle
Never mindful of this war’s full extent
As past victories have made you overconfident

I will sadly question such a life
Seemingly at it’s best during a fight
The most joyful in times of strife
Causing daily pain, you sleep well at night
On your battlefield you are ever to be
Never knowing if I will attack or flee

Worn down you appear, from this long war
Each day won bringing you closer to defeat
Not so strong as you seemed before
Starting a conquest you could never complete
More dreadful time will surely go by
Out of your hollow victory, I shall fly

Call to me, but I shall never return
Sound your war horns if you will
Across the river, your bridge I shall burn
Late at night before going over the hill
Away from the battlefield, I will be
No more of your constant war for me

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dadio
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Re: The Battlefield

Post by dadio » September 16th, 2011, 2:42 am

Good poem & theme.

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Re: The Battlefield

Post by creativesoul » October 25th, 2011, 4:27 pm

looks like these words have said what they need to say- hopefully you will find healing from that war= i assume that this battlefield is within - hopefully you will win the nobel peace prize= aloha-nice write
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: The Battlefield

Post by Arcadia » October 26th, 2011, 2:00 pm

powerful monologue, Atehequa...! gracias!

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