Didactic tale or song to go to sleep next friday the 13th

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Didactic tale or song to go to sleep next friday the 13th

Post by Arcadia » September 16th, 2011, 7:07 pm

The satin blue sky stirs and flames
contrasting with modest yellow surfaces & encrypted greens

The old neighborhood is miles away, crossing the sea
and three men from there
(at least their voices articulated in strange languages)
reach the other side of the land
(wich appear not to be their own)

Hey!, are they new crusaders in jackets and ties
emerging from dust, masses´s rebellions & automatic bees?
are they a new version of the three magician- kings?
or the new three stooges with a big army behind , maybe?


One, the proverbial pirate
talking about fighting mercenaries.
The other, the oily court intrigator
gesticulating in infinite ways about reconciliation.
The last one, the cruel, plain and avid clown,
just lost between recipes
& the diligent nextdoor woman´s sight.

Hey!, are they new crusaders in jackets and ties
emerging from dust, masses´s rebellions & automatic bees?
are they a new version of the three magician- kings?
or the new three stooges with a big army behind , maybe?

The old neighborhood is miles away, crossing the sea
and three men from there
(at least their voices articulated in strange languages)
reach the other side of the land
(wich appear not be their own)

The satin blue sky stirs and flames
contrasting with modest yellow surfaces & encrypted greens

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Re: Didactic tale or song to go to sleep next friday the 13t

Post by the mingo » September 18th, 2011, 2:15 pm

I just love automatic bees... 8) Thx, Veronica.
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Re: Didactic tale or song to go to sleep next friday the 13t

Post by saw » September 19th, 2011, 6:51 am

at least Moe, Larry and Curly gave us a few chuckles, the new stooges have black hearts and expensive taste, the pie in the face has been replaced by the drone missile.....the sky flames 'round the world as immature frat boys test out their new toys.....and people lose hope.......the citizens seem paralyzed by the OZ-like display.....but all we really need to do is pull back the curtain.....good poem
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Re: Didactic tale or song to go to sleep next friday the 13t

Post by Arcadia » September 19th, 2011, 6:35 pm

yeah..., to bee or not to bee...! :roll: I just coudn´t believe my eyes & my ears...! :shock: :lol: gracias amigos for reading.

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