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creativesoul
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Post by creativesoul » September 24th, 2011, 12:52 pm

when i looked into his eyes
that very first time
i knew i was done

then it wasnt fun anymore
i wanted to go home
he knew
i was leaving
somehow
even in all the drama and emotion
that color of the ocean
drew me home
do i think of him
when i am having coffee with the morning star
i think somehow that love is the most baffling
intense thing that we are
how bazzare
how bazzare
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: innocent

Post by saw » September 25th, 2011, 8:45 am

baffling indeed.......often inexplicable even with poetic license.........aloha
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism

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