JUST BEYOND.

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dadio
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JUST BEYOND.

Post by dadio » September 30th, 2011, 2:52 pm

And Auntie saying Don’t
Go too far so I can’t see you
And off you’d go off down
The iron stairs with the dog
In pursuit and the wind in the
Sails of your coat and the sky
Beckoning above and Auntie’s
Voice trailing away on the wind’s
Wings and you happy as the sun
In the morning sky making your
Feet rush across grass and the dog
Overtaking looking back tongue
Out of the side of its mouth and
You saying Go on you mutt run
Run and your young legs taking
You far from Auntie’s sight and
Yet looking back you know she’ll
Be there hands in the clothes
Wash scrubbing away her elbows
Wet from the plunge and you
Throwing hands to the sky and
Saying Lift me up wind take me
To the great place beyond the clouds
Of white and sky of blue with just
The mutt and five year old you.
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Re: JUST BEYOND.

Post by saw » October 2nd, 2011, 9:06 am

you corralled the exuberance of a boy and his dog, the joy of youth unfettered and free as a bird in flight..... to always be remembered.....the images, the symbols of a time when life was so simple.......
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: JUST BEYOND.

Post by dadio » October 2nd, 2011, 1:22 pm

Thank you, Saw.

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