daytona daydream

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saw
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daytona daydream

Post by saw » October 7th, 2011, 10:18 pm

top down
burnt orange hair
waving majestically
in the wind like old glory
used to when channel 9
went off the air, but this breeze
is artificially created
my miles per hour, '64 coupe de ville
candy apple red
but not so fast that I can't see you
twirling a strand of your
flaming locks with your left hand
while your right hand
vigorously pounds the dashboard
which can only mean one thing,
you're driving with your knees
and that turns me on
'cause nervous energy is always
suppressed sexual tension
so I tromp on the accelerator
to get a closer look to see two emerald beams
glance into your rear view mirror
translucent beads dangling
from a necklace refract a torrid rainbow
swinging wildly as you bop up and down
side to side as steppenwolf howls
from the am radio, inciting fever
calling for a primal response,
so my customized fantasy begins
and there I am navigating the curves
of your exquisite body with great
attention to detail, like
my neighbor who takes all day
to wash and wax his pickup truck
on his hands and knees
removing unwanted debris
from the tire treads with a toothbrush
that kind of detail
and oooh what a journey it is
endless euphoria around each bend
the climax secondary
to the exploration, and then we
BEEEEEP !!!!!
MOVE IT ASSHOLE !!!!
oh shit, the light is green,
what just happened ?
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: daytona daydream

Post by judih » October 8th, 2011, 12:06 am

what happens
toothbrush meets pavement
horns honk reality

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Re: daytona daydream

Post by dadio » October 12th, 2011, 7:37 am

Good take on life and well worded.

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