the rubble will not be televised

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mnaz
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the rubble will not be televised

Post by mnaz » October 27th, 2011, 7:28 pm

(revised)

spew it
like a 900-foot depleted uranium christ
pray to the FOX talkin' points a-rattlin'
and the polls, they keep a-slippin'
the people keep askin' questions
like those old columbo shows
peter falk kept comin' back
sir, just one more question
and the murderer smirked
late for his morality play
that detective is back
askin' questions

in the war room,
weathered moral men pound leather
push pawns and masturbate over legacy
take justice to a cheap motel and fuck her hard
for the holy charred screaming hell of it
for the armor-plated numb of it
for the buzz, mostly the buzz

pray for the cleansing blood of capital
for the atonement of our new markets
to mass-produce our spirit, scrub our identity
we lurk in icy black depths of fear, poised
we clutch new weapons of destruction
muttering, "freedom, sweet freedom"
sold into bondage by shadows

can we do what we must
when it is beaten out of us?
or summon a river from desolation?
no one writes home anymore

(12 / 26 / 06)

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Re: the rubble will not be televised

Post by judih » October 27th, 2011, 11:19 pm

good one. revision hits hard but in a welcome spot.

& title is excellent

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Re: the rubble will not be televised

Post by creativesoul » October 28th, 2011, 2:18 pm

the streets are filled with what is happening in this poem- loving it=aloha
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: the rubble will not be televised

Post by sonofthesun » October 29th, 2011, 2:51 am

smiles. the last four lines are perfect.
There is no empty space

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Re: the rubble will not be televised

Post by Arcadia » October 29th, 2011, 9:42 am

great poem, mnaz! :D

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Re: the rubble will not be televised

Post by Kailashana » October 29th, 2011, 12:09 pm

Wow! Never thought I'd find another poet who put Peter Falk's Columbo into a poem.

This one is no kangaroo court.

~A

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Re: the rubble will not be televised

Post by mnaz » October 30th, 2011, 3:25 pm

wrote this one after the "surge" was announced. i was so fuckin' tired of the epic lie ... yeah, i guess it's a bit punchy ...

thanks judih, creativesoul, sonofthesun, Arcadia, Kailashana . . .

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