its hittin me hard

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sonofthesun
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its hittin me hard

Post by sonofthesun » October 30th, 2011, 2:54 am

i see myself
not knowing
from whence i come
i am a child
with a mother
her parents told her
to give away
and she did
and no matter
its better than
have never been
There is no empty space
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dadio
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Re: its hittin me hard

Post by dadio » October 30th, 2011, 3:19 am

Indeed it is. Well capturerd.
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Re: its hittin me hard

Post by creativesoul » October 30th, 2011, 9:56 pm

i hope that child is learning compassion and love for itself- aloha
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: its hittin me hard

Post by sonofthesun » November 3rd, 2011, 1:23 am

im trying creativesoul
There is no empty space
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