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the mingo
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our shoes

Post by the mingo » November 30th, 2011, 2:16 pm

well it's like this there is only so much fuel in the bottle, get it?
then what ya gonna do with your ladybug timer and your old paneled walls?
i don't like artificial coolness myself but real cold
is unforgiving in its surroundedness
& begins relentless very much to creep inside.
illusion is not fact
any granddaughter knows that much
so what if she looks at you in a new language where construction
is not a matter of putting together
but of seeing
as the basis of any language is image
for words are doors & every moment the land
is just born to a tumbled body
and there is no need to jump off a bridge to find
in the rushing waters below just how much
we want to live
we can discover that
without even taking off our shoes
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: our shoes

Post by Arcadia » November 30th, 2011, 9:18 pm

I imagine this poem said by someone in the urge of making a molotov and at the same time give an explanation... great tone you created here, mingo...!!!!!!! :lol: :D

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Re: our shoes

Post by the mingo » December 1st, 2011, 1:35 am

Thx Veronica - didn't thik about it as I was writing it but you are right what you said.
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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