A Visionary Poem

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theirishsea
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A Visionary Poem

Post by theirishsea » December 7th, 2011, 11:45 am

my eyes are shattering today
like raindrops
my vision keeps running
to corners, crevices
drains

I'm viewing the tunnels
built under everything
and so I see
what holds it all up
those steel beams
that my eyes rust

I do not have words
they are too like clouds
you can't stand in them
but fall

and so the vision
is a puddle
only the sun and every other surface
thing
can withstand

the depths sink
into their element
the murky water ot tears
of happy, happy tears
an underground river
digging at
everything
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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dadio
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Re: A Visionary Poem

Post by dadio » December 9th, 2011, 2:57 pm

Well captured.

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