The Tipping Point

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Kailashana
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The Tipping Point

Post by Kailashana » January 30th, 2012, 7:08 am

You were on the tip of my tongue
but I had nothing more to say,
and so it is
that poetry is by far the easiest
thing to swallow.

If you think I'm your friend, your lover,
your enemy or your Beloved
you're only half-right
only as far as your thinking goes
so here goes a quick assessment
of the blessed rite of passage,
down, down where nobody knows
how far the truth goes
that never has been said
and left you for dead,
alive and kicking into that gaping mouth
that holds the void, opening,

opening and bidding you "come".

~A
Last edited by Kailashana on January 30th, 2012, 8:33 am, edited 1 time in total.

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the mingo
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Re: The Tipping Point

Post by the mingo » January 30th, 2012, 8:08 am

((( *fuck*)))
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

Kailashana
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Re: The Tipping Point

Post by Kailashana » January 30th, 2012, 8:35 am

:shock: Oh, my. Whatever do you mean?

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Re: The Tipping Point

Post by the mingo » January 30th, 2012, 9:06 am

I came damn near to spraying a mouthful of coffee all over my monitor and keyboard with your response here ~A...
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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