Breath

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Kailashana
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Breath

Post by Kailashana » March 18th, 2012, 1:15 pm

You know,
that space
that holds us
together
so close
not even a word can enter edgewise,
the scent of us yodelling with the edelweiss and lama
that ascent that climbs into wetlands we have
all but forgotten
and
stretches into an eternity that must linger until....

you remember, just like this
and
don't you feel it too, my darling?

Now breathe.

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dadio
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Re: Breath

Post by dadio » March 18th, 2012, 3:54 pm

Very good. 8)

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