the thoughts of another

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creativesoul
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the thoughts of another

Post by creativesoul » May 28th, 2012, 1:01 am

once, a woman told me that people s thoughts were alive, that she could see them- i chalked her up as just another lunatic, and well she had some gifts but - some people let all that stuff go to their head. there was this woman i knew- she had a bad story and she told it well- she became the greediest woman i ever knew- as it turns out - 62% of her brain is clogged- so i can relax about that crap=i try yo be frenz with everyone, doesnt really work, but i still try. but when someone is bound and determined to take all your stuff- well - might as well just watch her spin, because that is what she does best- on days like today- i think that she is very unhappy- because i got nuthin!
the list of so many people manipulated into doing one of her scams... loses everything to her- like a casino-
all alone in that big house with her deaf husband
how can she stand it? when she yells at him,he cannot hear me
imagine that
she wanted what everyone else had
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: the thoughts of another

Post by dadio » May 28th, 2012, 4:01 am

Good tale told and told well.

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