SUN BLOCK.

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dadio
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SUN BLOCK.

Post by dadio » June 4th, 2012, 2:30 am

The plump lady
who occupied
with her behind
the front two seats

of the green bus
has passed away
and no one went
to her lonely

sad funeral
except a priest
and the lady
from the sweet shop

who sold Sally
the plump lady
dark chocolate
bars each morning

and cigarettes
and the old man
who lived next door
who used to peep

through net curtains
as she undressed
in the evenings
and others sit

where she once sat
and sunlight shines
into the bus
where she once sat

and others sense
the morning heat
that she blocked out
by sitting there

whom none talked to
but all would stare.
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Re: SUN BLOCK.

Post by judih » June 4th, 2012, 10:37 am

rest in peace
the rest will piece out her existence
without chocolate

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Re: SUN BLOCK.

Post by dadio » June 4th, 2012, 2:08 pm

Thank you, Judih.

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Re: SUN BLOCK.

Post by creativesoul » June 6th, 2012, 9:42 pm

nice :!:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: SUN BLOCK.

Post by dadio » June 7th, 2012, 3:11 am

Thank you, creativesoul

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Re: SUN BLOCK.

Post by Christopher T. George » June 7th, 2012, 8:50 pm

Hi dadio

A sad tale, well told. Good work, dadio. Enjoyed.

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Re: SUN BLOCK.

Post by dadio » June 8th, 2012, 1:59 am

Thank you, Chris.

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