A Day In July

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edsiejka
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A Day In July

Post by edsiejka » July 6th, 2012, 11:48 am

It was an innocent summer afternoon
And for a day we pushed our problems aside
The almanac promised a clear day, highs in the eighties
Instead it was muggy and hot in the low nineties
After lunch the three of us
Took a slow walk under the summer sun
Coming home we went our separate ways
Jon to the living room
Elaine upstairs and
I to the den
Where I fell into a deep sleep
My body sinking into the sofa.

A faint breeze circulated through the air
Suddenly a yellow light woke me up
The skies suddenly darkened
Then thunder
Followed by heavy rain
It was a summer storm
Sudden it its ferocity
And intensity.

Groggy
I woke up
Barefoot
Breathless
Joining Jon and Elaine
Running out to bring in the lawn cushions
In the rain we
Laughed
Made loud noises
Threw cushions around
Shrieked
To our hearts content
We were together again
Because of a summer storm.

saw
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Re: A Day In July

Post by saw » July 6th, 2012, 6:51 pm

mama nature is one great fixer-upper.......a very cool story...I assume autobiographical.....a summer storm playing unifier........
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: A Day In July

Post by dadio » July 10th, 2012, 3:03 am

Fine poem & theme.

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