BLUE MOON OVER KAUAI

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creativesoul
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BLUE MOON OVER KAUAI

Post by creativesoul » September 1st, 2012, 4:09 am

THE SWOON OF A SAILBOATS LULL
HE LOOKS AT ME LIKE HE COULD
EAT ME ALVE

MY LIFE SEE
HIS ENERGY ENHANCES THAT WHICH I KNEW
PERHAPS
I KNEW WITH YOU
BUT NO-
HADDA GO
I KNOW THE SMELL OF LOVE
THE THINGS THAT TO SPEAK TO ME
OF THE YEARS THAT SET ME FREE
LOVING BECAME A PART OF ME

SWEET MOMENTS UNDER THE MOONLIGHT
A KISS FROM A STRANGER
HE FLOATS BACK ON THE SEA
KISSING ME GOOD BYE SO TENDERLY
BUT IT WAS NOT THE KISS I WAITED FOR
COULDNT DO WHAT I ADORE
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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dadio
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Re: BLUE MOON OVER KAUAI

Post by dadio » September 1st, 2012, 5:11 am

Fine poem which I like a lot. Typos? sailboats =sailboat's & alve =alive.

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Re: BLUE MOON OVER KAUAI

Post by justwalt » September 1st, 2012, 9:53 am

if I had a ship, I'd run her aground there...

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Re: BLUE MOON OVER KAUAI

Post by creativesoul » September 1st, 2012, 1:44 pm

it would be a brilliant idea-aloha
sorry- typos happen- and i let them be
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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