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thanks for all our comments

Post by sweetwater » September 14th, 2012, 5:21 am

thanks for all your comments for one thing

hey you this mysterious note
and morning across the sunless sky
today as rain and wet places umbrellas
and rainshoes walk into
the possibility of being and becoming

...

or is it the other way around ???
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Re: thanks for all our comments

Post by judih » September 14th, 2012, 10:27 am

mosaic picturesque
like visiting another planet
here no rain, no how
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