Into The Deep

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Into The Deep

Post by stilltrucking » September 24th, 2012, 3:45 am

http://video.pbs.org/video/1485863181

woke from a dream elizabeth taylor debbie reynolds
I kept trying to write a dream in my poem

the girl with the dangerous eyes
the distraught hair
the empty womb
the metaphysical blues

thinking about cape cod again
maybe I should not have used a condom
is that why she called me an ass hole.

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Re: Into The Deep

Post by stilltrucking » September 24th, 2012, 4:32 am

deleted this from the haiku board just now

wrote a poem in my dream
woke to thoughts of Cleopatra
Elizabeth taylor and Debbie Reynolds
and Eddie Fisher and the woman in Cape Cod
how women do each other in their competition for mates
is that what my dream was about?

I worked hard on that poem
choosing the right words
Rearranging the lines
now all I got left is this.

Distraught hair
dangerous eyes
an empty womb

I fell asleep listening to the PBS video above not sure what Moby Dick Had to do with my dream :?

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Re: Into The Deep

Post by stilltrucking » September 24th, 2012, 7:51 am

everything gets so old and weird
woke up to that thought
from a dream of what?

how women compete for men?

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Re: Into The Deep

Post by stilltrucking » September 24th, 2012, 7:43 pm

"I could be bounded in a nutshell, and count myself a king of infinite space, were it not that I have bad dreams."



"any attempt to defend Christianity undermines its authority"

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Re: Into The Deep

Post by stilltrucking » September 24th, 2012, 9:31 pm

Power, that's what I want. Most of all over myself, than the world.


peace full night in the heartland

ready for bed
maybe she will be in my dreams again

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