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sunday rap

Post by justwalt » November 4th, 2012, 12:54 am

oh them gods...
ya just gotta--gotta god bless em,
if ya can't see em--gotta guess em,
just gotta know how...
to finesse em...

ain't no more shoulda or coulda,
confessin' who did unto who,
I wish mine never woulda, but...
what did yours...
...do for you

all them prayers...
gotta say em with more expression,
with a little concessional discretion,
to defeat that...
debonair obsession...

before your passions crash in ashes,
ya gotta read between them lines,
better get some better glasses, to...
find the signs...
...of the times

and the sooth-sayers...
talk about some evasive action,
gotta break the chain reaction,
bust the laws...
of that attraction...

ya can't fix it--just can't un-mix it,
don't wanna feed it like ya used to,
just bid adieu then eighty-six it, cuz...
nothing new...
...is ever really new

promises on promises...
we're all in it for the duration,
evolved around our revelation,
so cash em in on...
the real relation...

gotta bail off that dragon's tail,
salvation ain't no kiddie ride,
that gallant age has no avail, so...
cast aside...
...that shell of pride

oh yeah--them gods...
ya gotta cheer em--gotta fear em,
and try to fit a bit more near em,
if ya really ever...
wanna hear em...

and if that sabre starts to rattle,
better learn to walk on water,
or be in the thick of battle, on...
some distant dusty border...
for that new...
...world...
...order

wgs/10/12

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Re: sunday rap

Post by tarbaby » November 4th, 2012, 3:12 pm

God I hate rap!
Are you sure it was rap?
Rap comes on all pushy finger in face
or is that just because of the jungle rythms of the music


what ever it is, I loved reading it, maybe if I had heard your reading of it I would have enjoyed it more, hard to believe cause I thought it was a great poem :D

...
the whole thing fit together and flowed but just to pick this bit at random cause I was alway a spooky kid

got to fear em, fit near them

that is why I will be moving to salt lake city utah after the election :wink:
“Where is that man who has forgotten words that I may have a word with him?”

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Re: sunday rap

Post by creativesoul » November 4th, 2012, 3:24 pm

ok all righty then- SMOKE EM UP-
JOKE EM UP
choked it up
pride wrote it down
wishing you only the best
now give it a rest
over it
with the wordy birdy
getting down and dirty
so strange with all the crazy flirty
empty purtty
sweety testy
all that zesty
around
the sound
of rap
crap
WHATEVER
'VERY CLEVER'
SAY THE RIGHT THINGS
MEAN WHAT YOU SAY
SAY WHAT YOU MEAN
KEEP IT CLEAN
THE SHEEN
OF CREAM OF THE DREAM
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: sunday rap

Post by justwalt » November 4th, 2012, 4:32 pm

many is a word

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Re: sunday rap

Post by one of those jerks » November 4th, 2012, 4:36 pm

Nietzsche died for our sins
and Jesus brought a casserole
lions and tigers and
rag bags of crocodiles abound
got to keep a sense of humor
when you got a super ego like some dirty old Jew G d 8)
those harlots by the side of the rode
love is free but it takes dough ray me to have babies witha chance of surviving in these good old golden age we are in
rumble rambling action go what it is to rap :?:
She is twice the man I am.

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Re: sunday rap

Post by justwalt » November 4th, 2012, 8:14 pm

maybe it's rap, maybe hip hop...
could be mozart, (whom I love a lot),
it's you, it's me... and my friends the trees.

maybe it's a dream, maybe a vision or illusion,
maybe all of these together... if a human mind
can conceive of it, then it has already been known
in the mind of... a god.

...nothing new is ever really new...

such a god would not need to create a single thing...
the thought of it would be sufficient enough.

science is having a hard time proving that anything
is "real"... us included.

they might be correct in thinking this way... but then,
what does this mean for the mind of a god that just
thought this whole thing up...

would this god have to then question its own existence ?

"I am I am"... means... the big guy is clueless.

me too.
many is a word

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Re: sunday rap

Post by creativesoul » November 4th, 2012, 8:39 pm

ROCKING ON IN Z OLDEST WAY
I TRY NOT TO BELIEVE WHAT I THINK- GO BY THAT INNER LIGHT
WHICH IS BACK ON
:!:
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: sunday rap

Post by justwalt » November 4th, 2012, 9:03 pm

I TRY NOT TO BELIEVE WHAT I THINK- GO BY THAT INNER LIGHT...
light is the key... or one key...

light is energy, and energy is light,
it is about as far as we can reduce ourselves to...
or elevate ourselves to...

we're in some kind of flux, and I almost can't wait to
convert mine from its current condition.

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