spare poem

[revolutionrabbit]

radio rain in the face
solar eclipse New York push button rose blade
slaughter jazz my hope dope penny heaven
king tear flood hot rod dance green submarine
lava tongue cock roach smile moon neon donut
black cape whirl midnight blood shadow lover
hearts bleed silent cities sleeping lighter fluid
the poet on the shattered street lit a cigarette
of newspapers, she death talking star chasms
come up and see me sometime little Egypt
Dylan place at freedom and western movie
old bohemian back door crow diamond flash
give us this day our daily circus of lust and
forgive us our forgotten change spare poem

[david]

Really enjoyed the way you put this, David

[dadio]

If only James Joyce had written poems like this as well as Finegan's Wake. Intense and compact. Enjoyed.

[revolutionrabbit]

intense and compact, Joyce in a English ford

[stilltrucking]

what to say, to express my gratitude after reading the poem

thank you for writing
a nugget of a poem
a very dense poem for me, I mean
a poem with a high specific gravity,
a lot of dark matter between the words


http://jersey.uoregon.edu/~mstrick/AskG ... erry7.html

[stilltrucking]

Kurt Vonnegut
James Joyce

reason madness
art reality

survival extinction
sapient tragedy

Apollo Dionysus
Cosmic Goof

don't mean nothing
just a non poets attempt
a homage
A GO
jamming james names
what ever happened to GO