june ku

Clarity.
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incessant bird beat
five am five am five
until i'm up
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along with birds
mind begins melody
unique for the day
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rained out
my day is ruined
no bike riding today

that bike gives me reason to live
other than that
there is just just this
"Skepticism is the chastity of the intellect" Santayana The Idea of Christ in the Gospels
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sometimes ya plant
sometimes ya scatter
i don't know which what
is this
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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this text box
a mourning dove calling
fingers typing
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consciousness
wanders back to body
exhausted from dreams
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free of dreams
that's what I want to be
free of dreams!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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after high speed
slow downward descent
sprawl into dawn
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snarling growling gnashing dog.
flash back seventy years,
I thought I was over that fear

if not for dreams
how can I wake up?
I want to fly
walk the talk
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what? one more day?
a new chance
to be me
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endless hours
slip into finite minutes
caught again
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tiny poems
paintings on the wall
i am one with my milk
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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voices come
storm smells a whisper
as the summer soars
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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the mingo wrote:voices come
storm smells a whisper
as the summer soars
how i love the line " storm smells a whisper"

wonderful
(& i'm forced to recreate that whisper as i bike into dusty sand day)
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8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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