lack of medication

[david]

You twist a half inch
of lipstick
from its housing,
but I see a dogs cock
emerging from its furry pouch
that you put to your lying bitch
mouth

and if I could borrow
Francis Dolarhyde's
killing teeth
you would be my Freddy Lounds.

[zero_hero]

very nice work!
on a personal subjective kind of level
I used to post to Litkicks, I posted some gory haikus about ripping peoples throats out with my teeth.
I think I used to have about seven or eight user names over-there. All of them got deleted sooner or later. They told me I needed professional help. and i agreed my writing could use some help from a professional editor
pardon the ramble
I have mellowed these days now that I am a toothless tiger.

[dadio]

Ah, yes, worthy work, love it.

[david]

Zero-Hero, thanks for your post, brilliant...D

Dadio, always a pleasure......D

[Arcadia]

lost in names but auch moment kind of word feeling, david! Gracias for sharing it!

[creativesoul]

lessons in dog eat dog=- 'always liked the term 'lying bitch as it has no gender really- or= is it just that i have rubbed both sides of that coin? dunno- nice write-like afternoon cafe

[david]

Arcadia, thank you for your thoughts, I knew the names would not come readily to mind for some readers, they are characters from the film "Manhunter" from 1986....David

Creativesoul, thank you for your read and post......David

[sweetwater]

seemingly poetic though ...
more in the referencing

of ... scatology

[david]

hahaha, yeah you could say that, seeya....D