love me, i hope

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sonofthesun
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love me, i hope

Post by sonofthesun » October 26th, 2013, 2:15 am

it was me at age 7
hopin i had done good
hopin i had done right
workin for lovin
without a thought of what or why
whilst hopin i was apart
of somethin
tryin to find that wisp of hope
a little boy prayin with out sayin nothin
thinking good thoughts upon the sideline
There is no empty space
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Re: love me, i hope

Post by the mingo » October 26th, 2013, 8:36 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: love me, i hope

Post by dadio » October 28th, 2013, 7:37 am

I like these looking back at childhood poems. 8)
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