vicarious vision

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saw
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vicarious vision

Post by saw » November 13th, 2013, 11:49 am

lovers kiss at the table
i do the crossword puzzle
as if this newspaper game
were the equivalent

that doesn't mean i am sad
it means i notice
i smile at them
for them

when it works
it's a rock opera
with masterful instrumentation and killer voices
they grab each others hand

they laugh
they squeeze, they fondle
it causes me no pain
i smile inside

for i have sat at that very same table
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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dadio
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Re: vicarious vision

Post by dadio » November 14th, 2013, 10:23 am

Me and you both...Very good 8)

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the mingo
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Re: vicarious vision

Post by the mingo » November 14th, 2013, 8:51 pm

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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