ALICE AND THE CARICATURE.

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dadio
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ALICE AND THE CARICATURE.

Post by dadio » December 14th, 2013, 7:22 pm

Alice chalks
secretly, in
red and white,
a caricature

of the new
nanny her
father has hired.
The stick like

figure is spread
eagled across
the side wall
of the house,

red hair, eyes
and mouth,
white long
protruding

teeth and
four fingers
on each hand.
She has heard

her parents row;
the new nanny
took her by
her small hand

to the nursery
and sat her in
a chair; stay
there, she said.

She draws a
thin white line
of chalk through
the nanny's heart.

She stares, smiles,
and wipes her
hands on her
pinafore and

put her hands
behind her back.
Her father had
punished; her

mother had
cried and rowed
and now Alice
waits outside,

by the wall,
staring at the
caricature, the
stick nanny

with an arrow
through her heart.
The sun is dull;
rain threatens;

birds sing; the
thin maid walks
with a mild limp.
Alice waits for

rain; her hands
sense the area
of punishment
pain. Mother

loves and hugs
and kisses. Her
Father glares
and shouts

and smacks
and never misses.
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Re: ALICE AND THE CARICATURE.

Post by creativesoul » December 14th, 2013, 8:06 pm

wow- smacks- mmm sounds like =============a sad child- smile sweet one-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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Re: ALICE AND THE CARICATURE.

Post by dadio » December 15th, 2013, 2:27 am

Thank you, creativesoul. The different genre of poetry fro me. Not autobiographical. Set in 1890s. Priveldged class at least regards wealth.

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Re: ALICE AND THE CARICATURE.

Post by the mingo » December 15th, 2013, 10:35 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: ALICE AND THE CARICATURE.

Post by dadio » December 16th, 2013, 3:21 am

:D

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