kauai -2014 march- the painting

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creativesoul
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kauai -2014 march- the painting

Post by creativesoul » March 29th, 2014, 1:33 pm

feet walking
charmed by years of sea
his skin when he was alive
his jokes
my niece
best peace of love
laughing about it
crying with it
smiling
walking in hawaii
touching buddahs
waterfalls
time
his eyes watching me
loving me
knowing and trusting
me to say the right thing
to open that heart
he believed in me a lil too much
but he was right
the love came rolling down like a thousand years of rain
california looked on with envy
rain came down like a blessing
hawaiians sang old tunes
there were calabashes of food
a celebration
laka and lono
the beauty
the hula- the taste of food in hanalei
nothing beats itmiss you g man= miss you
inside out
the pier
your face
laughter
that golden surfer body
miss you
love you-
because i feel you here
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

david
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Re: kauai -2014 march- the painting

Post by david » March 29th, 2014, 4:32 pm

You captured a feeling beautifully. I especially liked,
walking in hawaii
touching buddahs
waterfalls
time
his eyes watching me
loving me
knowing and trusting
me to say the right thing
to open that heart
he believed in me a lil too much
but he was right
the love came rolling down like a thousand years of rain
and the line,
nothing beats itmiss you g man= miss you
Thank you David

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Re: kauai -2014 march- the painting

Post by creativesoul » March 29th, 2014, 10:19 pm

thank you- it is the most elated and sweet love i have known
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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