Elemental Fusion

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ADannon
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Elemental Fusion

Post by ADannon » March 12th, 2005, 3:00 am

O’ restless main,
Against the breast
Of earth resides.
Her dun hued neck
Receives his cold caress.

Though chilled and tame
She begs a touch,
His frigid stroke.
Relentless he
Embraces and recedes.

With constancy
Her ache erased
Then need renewed~
As in her arms
His passion knows no end.

hester_prynne

Post by hester_prynne » March 12th, 2005, 3:07 pm

Beauty revealed, breathtakingly.

This piece is first rate AD.
really enjoyed it

H 8)

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Post by ADannon » March 12th, 2005, 10:19 pm

*smiling* Am glad you found it so H~ Thank you for reading~

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Post by mtmynd » March 13th, 2005, 9:28 pm

Well, ADannon ... quite a piece you've created here! It took me on a pleasant journey. Thank you for sharing.

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Post by ADannon » March 19th, 2005, 9:10 pm

mtmynd~
Thanks for reading and letting me know you did~ *s*

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