O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

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the mingo
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O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

Post by the mingo » October 31st, 2014, 3:29 am

brewing bugs in the desert
blowing my brain
my best friend's in France
but i'm going to Spain
where the women
don't shave their armpits
but dance across an expanse of stage
where things never gather, hang around, or pile up
i'll watch them from the street
as my dolphins eat fish
and november waits
right around the corner
tinged with darkness
& smiling at the threat of rain
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

Post by whoaisme » October 31st, 2014, 9:22 am

smiling at the threat of rain!?

DAMMIT MAN
THATS A GREAT POEM!
8)
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia
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Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

Post by the mingo » October 31st, 2014, 10:02 am

8) THX whoaisme - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Post by creativesoul » October 31st, 2014, 5:29 pm

really slick- nice
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

Post by mtmynd » October 31st, 2014, 8:18 pm

you got the rhythm, you got the beat
you got the words makin' dancin' feet

el mingo... nice and over easy like a polite fried egg.
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Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

Post by WIREMAN » November 1st, 2014, 11:24 am

i remember a beautiful european girl at the pool when i was a kid, i was blown away when she lifted her arms....then the hippie daze came and changed all that.....real cool flow going on here 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

Post by the mingo » November 1st, 2014, 9:40 pm

Thx folks - keep jammin on 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: O Rosa! you know my dream, show me your teeth

Post by saw » November 2nd, 2014, 4:20 pm

you cover a lot of ground in a short space...and it all works
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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