across the field

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the mingo
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across the field

Post by the mingo » February 25th, 2015, 12:31 am

across the field
a withered stem of last year's goldenrod
bent and shaken by winter winds
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: across the field

Post by judih » February 25th, 2015, 10:57 am

sounds like a painting
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Re: across the field

Post by saw » February 25th, 2015, 12:20 pm

winter
is sobering
we understand what just happened
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading
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