The Modern Siren

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68degrees
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The Modern Siren

Post by 68degrees » March 1st, 2015, 11:57 am

Toward the end of an early evening,
a strange bird straight out of poem
or old song alights atop a Park Safe
signage down on Rhode Island Avenue
and sings its own doleful song
for those who have been wronged.

Anyone who listens strips and lies
prone-naked on hard red bricks
ashamed, not touching, as if God
himself knew what each was thinking.

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WIREMAN
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Re: The Modern Siren

Post by WIREMAN » March 2nd, 2015, 3:51 am

gotta listen to that birds song....yes we do....nice piece.... 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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Re: The Modern Siren

Post by the mingo » March 2nd, 2015, 9:55 am

8) up here the heavy fall
of silent snow
is deafening - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: The Modern Siren

Post by 68degrees » March 2nd, 2015, 4:04 pm

I'm not even sure what this poem is...it just kind of came out. I was looking at this stupid bird acting weird on top of this sign (I was waiting at a street light) and it just struck me as odd...thanks for acknowledging it.

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whoaisme
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Re: The Modern Siren

Post by whoaisme » March 2nd, 2015, 5:10 pm

i love listening to the birds sing except for crows.

crows can eat shit!

nice one 68!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia

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