Rue st marry

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creativesoul
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Rue st marry

Post by creativesoul » March 6th, 2015, 4:14 pm

Once in a long ago
Norman Rockwell
June cleaver
My three sons

Somewhere btween the Adams family and the munsters
Peter max and the Beatles
Abbey road
Somewhere between I love you
And I cannot stand another minute with you
Come close now go away
I want you to be the one
That somehow we recognize each other
From lifetime after lifetime of really
Awesome laughter
I want to hear the electric impulses in your heart
Before mine stops ticking one last time
The sun moves- like love-,: sometimes
It is very warm- like a kind blanket of comfort
Others it is of concern that it is lost
Somewhere in this hear traveling with the wrong person
I missed the train that would have introduced us again
Divine intervention
I request to find the love
That suits me best
Before I lay me down to rest
St marry
The street of love
Only you know
The dove
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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WIREMAN
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Post by WIREMAN » March 6th, 2015, 4:43 pm

across universes
romantic interlude
i croon, "how high the moon"
wasted daze on lone prarie
lonely nights waiting in reverie
knowing she will come
a bracelet she gave me lost
in baltimore, found on studio floor
in frederick, crossroads of history
10 years later
move on she says
spockian mind melds
bats out of hell
seize that day with wings to fly
before it's too late
before it's too late.....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

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dadio
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Re: Rue st marry

Post by dadio » March 7th, 2015, 4:23 am

How many lives we live? Love this poem. 8)

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Re: Rue st marry

Post by saw » March 10th, 2015, 6:44 pm

love the markers of time you use in this, they certainly speak primarily to an age group that gets their implications....a cool tale of missed opportunities, lost love
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: Rue st marry

Post by creativesoul » March 11th, 2015, 3:00 am

Thank you! .. Adventure road trip tommorow to a sacred spot

I will write there :?:
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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