felicitous fitness

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saw
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felicitous fitness

Post by saw » March 22nd, 2015, 2:14 pm

pare it down
trim the fat
from your bulging tongue
carve your notions down
love the stripped bones
marvel at luscious skeletons
frolicking free of tissue
see new ideas
standing without tendons
walking without muscles
running without eyes,
lean but not mean
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

saw
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Re: felicitous fitness

Post by saw » March 25th, 2015, 11:33 am

good suggestion Ton.....lean but not seen
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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wylde
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Re: felicitous fitness

Post by wylde » March 26th, 2015, 7:19 am

saw - lush through its skint flint approach well expressed.
when the lungs are filled with bouquets & blossoms
it usually leads to suffocation...

enjoyed the read.

riteon.
.homesick. but homeless.

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