the art in evolutuion

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saw
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the art in evolutuion

Post by saw » July 2nd, 2015, 5:26 pm

time drips like fallen holy water
through the storm drains behind the eyes
it finds its way to the quantum ocean
where it is diluted into a mere droplet of breath

my life is thinning hair, knees that creak
like forgotten gate hinges, memories faded
threadbare, evaporating, like morning dew
but I am more than my petty difficulties

more, than the obvious fractions, more
than the weathered jigsaw pieces that remain
my mind is rich loam, a peat bog of imagination
my soul is an ancient redwood, sturdy, battle tested

my eyes are wise like rasputin's owls, calm
like a seabird soaring over timeless shores
my heart expels carbon data telling stories only I know
my being is more than decaying dna.... it is the art of evolution
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: the art in evolutuion

Post by Tjflowers80 » July 3rd, 2015, 12:59 am

It's great to have you back saw. We missed you. And again wonderful.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

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Re: the art in evolutuion

Post by theirishsea » July 3rd, 2015, 7:49 am

Some nice lines, images, expressions and thoughts
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: the art in evolutuion

Post by WIREMAN » July 3rd, 2015, 3:45 pm

real nice....so good i think i'll read it again....
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....

saw
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Re: the art in evolutuion

Post by saw » July 4th, 2015, 1:38 am

thanx y'all....appreciate the feedback fer sho
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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