with you taking yourself

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sweetwater
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with you taking yourself

Post by sweetwater » July 4th, 2015, 6:36 pm

in the dying of your heart
in the moment you
find yourself
leaving for what seems
the only solution
left ... to you

and there you run
and there you run

where you are !
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theirishsea
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Re: with you taking yourself

Post by theirishsea » July 6th, 2015, 5:28 pm

This poem says a lot more than the few words given us. I like the rhythm of thee 3 lnes in particular

the only solution
left ... to you

and there you run
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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