absence of time

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saw
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absence of time

Post by saw » July 16th, 2015, 9:37 pm

please don't tell me what time it is,
turn off your cell phone, put it away
let our time together not be measured
every second by rhythmic audible ticking

let us rise above the newness of the age
disappear in the nowness of the moment,
that will only be here just this once....
let us not regret any missed waltzes

let us not shun the dance partners
waiting in folding chairs on the other side
of the hall...swallow my eyes
let them melt in your mouth like truffles

of chocolate, savor what I see with them,
there is no need for pieces that monitor time
eschew all spinning hands and boxy red
flickering numbers

the earth will turn with or without us, and I can see
more clearly when I focus on this very moment,
when I lose myself head over heels, helplessly
in the absence of time
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: absence of time

Post by Tjflowers80 » July 16th, 2015, 10:18 pm

The gods have given you a great gift my friend.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

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the mingo
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Re: absence of time

Post by the mingo » July 17th, 2015, 10:29 am

Can't speak to the gods but your piece gave me a moment to remember the days before men carried talk in their pockets 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: absence of time

Post by judih » July 18th, 2015, 6:02 am

it's hard to sidestep the gods, I agree
However, this piece is luscious in its passion

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Re: absence of time

Post by saw » July 18th, 2015, 12:24 pm

thanx very much colleagues....enjoyed the comments immensely
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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