so simple we must fail, fuck myself

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sonofthesun
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so simple we must fail, fuck myself

Post by sonofthesun » September 1st, 2015, 2:11 am

build it up
break it down
pretend
do it all again
make
break
rinse repeat
we are all masochists
just look at my rotten toothed grin
my self righteousness dont sing so purdy
without this disease deep within
sweet lippin platitudes
while wishin disaster
you cant be good without my well wishes
dont be no uppity nigger
know your place
accept our disease
There is no empty space

Tjflowers80
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Re: so simple we must fail, fuck myself

Post by Tjflowers80 » September 2nd, 2015, 4:04 pm

Very powerful.
And above me the stars align
But not yet with my own
And the night birds sing
Whilst the demon haunts this restless soul.

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Re: so simple we must fail, fuck myself

Post by creativesoul » September 4th, 2015, 12:05 pm

mmmmmm dis-ease- lets break that down- unpack what that means- dis- ease- without comfort= struggle-then there is the family of origin material-
and how i proclaim the right to 'go away' when i no longer like the taste of the things i heaar
my ears hurt
shut up
i have heard too much bullshit
let me go
i watch as the cat watches the mouse in his hole-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

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