a higher octave

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Kailashana
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a higher octave

Post by Kailashana » September 17th, 2015, 11:00 am

neon city lights
and bible belts
country roads and mohawks
on children
green, blue and pink hair,
walking on two human feet
16 candles
and a lifetime of despair

fuzzy navels and champagne women
dressed to go nowhere--
it's all in a song I wrote
but I'm forgetting the words
line by line by line

notes to myself
in a Selfie world gone mad.


(This I wrote now as a return to a higher octave._

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the mingo
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Re: a higher octave

Post by the mingo » September 17th, 2015, 11:30 am

You go, Babydoll, you go ! 8) 8) reach for it !!
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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dadio
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Re: a higher octave

Post by dadio » September 21st, 2015, 2:50 pm

Neat poem. 8)

saw
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Re: a higher octave

Post by saw » September 21st, 2015, 3:50 pm

I can see it all...... 8) ........"in a Selfie world gone mad".....sums it up neatly
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Arcadia
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Re: a higher octave

Post by Arcadia » September 25th, 2015, 5:38 pm

bravo, Kaila!!!!!!!!!! :D

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