Older women

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creativesoul
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Older women

Post by creativesoul » October 24th, 2015, 12:57 pm

I looked into the eyes of a woman that spoke with a New York accent
She was coming back from volunteering at meals on wheels
She had pink on her shirt and was radiant
Those wrinkles from smiling
Spoke of many loves- stories of children and grandchildren
Rolled off her skin
All that lovin

The professor read a story about the little people
She read with inspiration
Adoration
I listened in admiration
Although dentures were new to her
She did quite well
I told her so
She was proud and happy
She taught a class in Celtic myths and legends
A pagan woman came and lectured
Fascinated by a world barely touched on by Stonehenge
Beltane festivals at the spring equinox
You have to listen-- like a fox
I have an elder that came to see me the other day
Her body seemed to be giving way
What a fascinating women she has been
How fortunate I have seen the things she tried to teach me
Aye I balked many times
Only again by rhymes
Did I hear her music- a thousand times
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---

saw
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Re: Older women

Post by saw » October 24th, 2015, 5:26 pm

excellent....intriguing and honest...like life, sometimes
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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