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Post by justwalt » December 17th, 2015, 12:03 am

everyday I awaken, in a dream come true,
every moment feels harmoniously magic,
they pass...
and yet none of these can truly be mine,
too soon, even the memories will be gone,
in a flash...
every breath taken, becomes another miracle,
as my cup of frequency runneth... all over,
free at last...
in this abyss of bliss, my preferred illusion,
where I'm not responsible for your reality,
alas...
it can be a solemn journey, in eremitic mode,
just me, myself and some willing universe,
outcasts...
so what'll you be doin' in a couple millennia,
who wishes to hold on to a tangible world,
I ask...
and from one shadow chaser's pointed view,
we all have a seat reserved in some paradise,
don't laugh...
today is a good day to... test an ultimate theory,
and roll with the changes, like the cosmos does,
just have a blast...

wgs/12/15
many is a word

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Re: clash

Post by saw » December 17th, 2015, 2:28 pm

each day is...a small miracle....our bodies still able to sustain that form that walks and talks, yet what lies beyond is also so very intriguing...I for one feel that consciousness goes on for ever....spins around our heads in a collective voice....and maybe...sometimes, that consciousness decides to inhabit a new soul....wonderful to ponder the possibilities...keep it light, and you will float

nice stream, walt
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: clash

Post by theirishsea » December 17th, 2015, 5:43 pm

the pass-flash-last-alas etc. is a good way to punctuate the poem.

Every day is a good day to have a blast but beware that you don't get blasted. Then you can't remember the good times.

Serious a second----I agree about trying to live here and now. I think e are on the same page----maybe not the same paragraph but more importantly the same page. 8)
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.

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Re: clash

Post by justwalt » December 17th, 2015, 10:14 pm

everything is happening... or is it not?
thank you saw man
the more time spent on studying reality,
the more it vanishes,
at best, it's a fantastic movie,
I've studied the human being,
for too long,
I don't know man
but I'm loving' it more... which includes
hating it too, both objectively enough...
but wow, these are exciting times
and I'm soaking' it all in...
I'm gonna die happy, (no matter) what


thanks sea man
well, ya can't have one without the other, turmoil and calm,
which fits everything else too I spose, the happening...
there's only one happening, involving everything, everywhere,
and at the same time, good and bad.
many is a word

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Re: clash

Post by judih » December 18th, 2015, 1:00 am

as i look
i forget to watch
but miracle is, i remember

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Re: clash

Post by justwalt » December 18th, 2015, 8:43 am

thanks judih

as it is it, was
many is a word

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