NO IT U LOVE

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justwalt
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NO IT U LOVE

Post by justwalt » November 26th, 2016, 12:47 am


NO IT U LOVE
(evolution)

words
words that do,
the few
the one
if one be true,
for any
the many
they all call you,
words
more words
words with a view,
new
who knew
you know why,
cry
wow
why ask why,
now
how then
whenever I try,
sigh
high again
time to fly,
good
bye

wgs/11/16
many is a word

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by the mingo » November 26th, 2016, 8:16 am

8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by revolutionR » November 26th, 2016, 3:08 pm

Like it.

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by justwalt » November 26th, 2016, 10:06 pm

evol u ti on
many is a word

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by saw » November 27th, 2016, 11:52 am

back to front... 8)
If you do not change your direction
you may end up where you are heading

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by justwalt » November 27th, 2016, 12:00 pm

:D yup
many is a word

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by revolutionR » November 28th, 2016, 3:45 pm

Remember when they use to say "love it or leave it" I wonder what they meant. :roll:

no it u love , to evolve.

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by justwalt » November 30th, 2016, 11:31 am

silly rabbit, tricks are for kids...
can't leave love, everything is made from it.
:D
many is a word

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Re: NO IT U LOVE

Post by theirishsea » November 30th, 2016, 12:04 pm

Interesting rhythm, good flow of words.
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