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the mingo
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Ouch

Post by the mingo » February 19th, 2017, 6:20 am

ouch ...
this poem - hurts
yet I keep
/ writing it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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Re: Ouch

Post by mnaz » February 19th, 2017, 10:57 am

Write it out!
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Re: Ouch

Post by WIREMAN » February 19th, 2017, 3:45 pm

Keep the writing coming. We needs it 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Re: Ouch

Post by judih » February 19th, 2017, 11:51 pm

better out than in
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Re: Ouch

Post by the mingo » February 20th, 2017, 4:02 am

judih wrote:better out than in
... or in than out. I thought I could be clever about all this
but i get lost in the symphony ... please God, don't let me end up as a smilie !
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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